F''K You

eating popcorn
like at the movies
she moves me

i can't
say how but
it's WOW

and i don't care
yourself if you will
my heart is still

my muse is real
a person that feels
not some alter ego

go and blame it
on her if it doesn't
work out

doubt
yourself
maybe

when looking
at your muse
maybe she's a prune
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March 20, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Evocative piece. x
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March 20, 2019 at 12:04 PM
I believe soup has a forum for serious critique. I personally do not feel educated enough in poetry to seriously critique outside of spelling and grammar, even then... Just what I like.
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March 20, 2019 at 10:35 AM
Maureen, you always leave a nice comment (I know: so it is written): don't say negative things... etc.... So writing poems here and receiving a comment is basically the same as receiving a "participation award". Everyone slap you on the back; good show, and you walk away smiling. jajaja I truly want grit. True grit, no "pun" intended. Thank you for always commenting.
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