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Russell
Over here way on south,
they put ya behind the green fence no doubt,
poets will come to visit us old mate ,
when we are there behind the greenest gate!
might b our fate..... :)
Andrea, chile listen here,
johnson's talking without beer,
fizzzz time, girls rock, n r in charge,
stow dem boys right in the barge, for later ....hey
Nancy, We aren't meant judge another,
very hard with poet brothers,
i've joined a band of loonietics,
the Soup is fun my type of hicks,
a desperate delight:)
Time to catch another horse, John S,
been slapped down n got divorce,
rise again and snavel new lady of course,
the cure i am supplying,
with women keep on trying,
dump remorse:( are you buying?
Tony L, Sorry mate we waffle lots,
an thoughts an words,
are all i got, more fun than kites a flying....
Francine, Life is full but incomplete,
without my lady, girl so sweet,
spring on a Jumbo indescreet, and rescue me from dying:(
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