Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

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Fizzle and Shine

floating on water
red sun's come down to the sea
blue waves in motion

shimmer and shine dusk
and stars are racing the moon
beyond fiery skies

as the hour grows late
the smoky drapes also fall
full of bright embers

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Victor Buhagiar March 16, 2023 at 3:08 AM Your haikus are so well written. Evelyn Judy Buehler March 16, 2023 at 11:24 AM Thank you so much. :)

Daisy Meadows March 16, 2023 at 1:25 AM A lovely description. Well written. Evelyn Judy Buehler March 16, 2023 at 11:23 AM Thank you, Jeanette. :)

Yann Rolland March 16, 2023 at 1:11 AM i love, it looks like a painting, and a brilliant on, have a nice day yann Evelyn Judy Buehler March 16, 2023 at 11:23 AM Thank you for your very nice comments, Yann. :)

Gershon Wolf March 15, 2023 at 7:03 PM That first stanza is truly mesmerizing, Evelyn! Evelyn Judy Buehler March 15, 2023 at 10:27 PM I'm so glad you found it mesmerizing. Thank you for a fine compliment. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2023 at 12:28 PM - Great x 3, Evelyn ... agree the third one is my favorite too :) - hugs Evelyn Judy Buehler March 15, 2023 at 6:15 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your comment brings happiness. :) hugs

Daniel Turner March 15, 2023 at 12:14 PM These are very nice, Evelyn. So descriptive! IFor me, I like the last one the best but they are very peaceful. Evelyn Judy Buehler March 15, 2023 at 6:12 PM Thank you very much, Daniel. It's nice to know you enjoyed these haiku. :)