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Fizzle and Shine

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floating on water red sun's come down to the sea blue waves in motion shimmer and shine dusk and stars are racing the moon beyond fiery skies as the hour grows late the smoky drapes also fall full of bright embers

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/16/2023 3:08:00 AM

Your haikus are so well written.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/16/2023 11:24:00 AM

Thank you so much. :)

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 3/16/2023 1:25:00 AM

A lovely description. Well written.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/16/2023 11:23:00 AM

Thank you, Jeanette. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/16/2023 1:11:00 AM

i love, it looks like a painting, and a brilliant on, have a nice day yann

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/16/2023 11:23:00 AM

Thank you for your very nice comments, Yann. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/15/2023 7:03:00 PM

That first stanza is truly mesmerizing, Evelyn!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/15/2023 10:27:00 PM

I'm so glad you found it mesmerizing. Thank you for a fine compliment. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2023 12:28:00 PM

- Great x 3, Evelyn ... agree the third one is my favorite too :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/15/2023 6:15:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your comment brings happiness. :) hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/15/2023 12:14:00 PM

These are very nice, Evelyn. So descriptive! IFor me, I like the last one the best but they are very peaceful.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/15/2023 6:12:00 PM

Thank you very much, Daniel. It's nice to know you enjoyed these haiku. :)