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FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU frozen is the moon every star an icy tear odd sort of beauty frost nipped the pumpkin charmed us all but never left strange jack-o-lantern hear their forlorn howl misting muzzles raised on high cruel winter’s heralds sitting by the hearth old dog asleep and dreaming hot wood fire crackling mantel clock tick tock two mice in breadbox eating i without a care

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 12/2/2011 10:27:00 PM
Now, this one looks like you had fun writing them... I once sat down and wrote 20 haiku's(( ghetto haiku's I MEAN)) and boy did i have fun... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:50:00 PM
you know.. Daver) i got quite lost in this magnificently simple write...
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Date: 10/14/2011 5:42:00 AM
This is one of the best Haikus i've read so far. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 10/13/2011 9:45:00 AM
Just stopping by to say HI!
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Date: 10/12/2011 3:54:00 PM
What a nice peaceful guy you are, mice in a bredbos and you without a care. Kind of made me like you a lot!
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Date: 10/11/2011 10:50:00 PM
These are GREAT and so fun to read thru. I really loved the first, second and last ones! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/11/2011 3:21:00 PM
Very nice haiku.Best wishes if for contest.
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