Five Passing Cloud Hai-Ku

Clouds pass by, silent,
against cerulean sky...
daring you to watch!

Artists paint the sky,
they say the clouds are easy...
they come in all shapes!

There was a rogue cloud,
it came from the horizon...
to share drops of hope!

Clouds float overhead,
they're waving their big white hands...
and the odd smile!

There comes a hard rain,
to take my sister sorrow...
and my brother pain!

date: 3/2/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start till the end. God bless you.
Groen Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Thanks, Beata, your comments always make me feel good, Meru.
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 7:44 PM
Great imagery in your verse. Sorry about your brother's pain when the weather changes. Congratulations on your win in JCB Brul's contest.
Groen Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Thanks for the comment, Eve, I really appreciate it!
Rolland Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 12:07 AM
lovely haikus, we have to care about clouds and theirs messages, great work yann
Groen Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 2:20 PM
Thanks, I really appreciate the comment...Meru.
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