Five Letter Words

dawn’s silky sweet start
        light puffy sugar skies blush…
            taste until scene fades 

                   19 Dec 2017
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Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 8:37 PM
a lingering sweet taste and then it's all gone! Very nice imagery, my friend.
Thomas Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 5:43 PM
This puts beautiful colors in the mind David :)
Michael Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Nice... I like it...All the best David
Allison Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 9:37 AM
absolutely beautiful use of the 5 letter words, a super haiku !Good luck in the contest David:-) hugs jan xx
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