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Five Decades

FIVE DECADES
It is yet dawn here!
Though the sun smiles glowingly
The souls set to toil
Like hypnotized spirit in deep laughter

It is yet dawn here!
The cloud had fermented
The earth arrogantly molested
Culminating a forced abortion

It is yet dawn here!
The journey had long began
The barns are of suckling
Counsels have been trodden
Five decades of fumbling and stumbling
When will it be dawn here?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on reaching this stage. All the best in the contest.One Love~O.O.
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Date: 1/3/2012 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Alupogun. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2011 10:06:00 AM
"The earth arrogantly molested." Wherever you are, Alupogun, be assured the line also fits here. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 12/27/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Alupogun. I wish you the best on your writing endeavors in the new year. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2011 1:47:00 PM
Great work!! Congrats Alupogun on your fabulous win in this contest...gautami
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congrats on your exciting win in the contest with this fascinating write ..luv..
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:39:00 PM
50 years lost.... This was a grand, mesmerizing poem.
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Date: 5/8/2011 1:15:00 PM
Im humbled,thanks for the encouragement
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Date: 5/7/2011 7:11:00 PM
cool write, keep it and always be inspirational as you do, motivates me alot
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