Five Card

gambler tempts the Fates
dead woods cemetery gates....
two aces and eights
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 20, 2010 at 6:09 PM
enjoyed your senryu,, the dealers special,, have a nice one,..p..d
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 11:55 PM
I don't understand the terms well, not being a card player, but I think it must be really cool what your meaning is!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 5:12 PM
That is a great winning hand Robb.. luv cards myself.. great piece of poetry in Senryu form luv.. enjoyed this one lots. happy weekend luv..
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Interesting ..Sara
Falotico Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 2:43 PM
I agree , wonderful images....Michael
Mehta Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Nice images of two aces and eights, Robb
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