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gambler tempts the Fates dead woods cemetery gates.... two aces and eights

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Date: 11/20/2010 6:09:00 PM
enjoyed your senryu,, the dealers special,, have a nice one,..p..d
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Date: 11/19/2010 11:55:00 PM
I don't understand the terms well, not being a card player, but I think it must be really cool what your meaning is!
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Date: 11/19/2010 5:12:00 PM
That is a great winning hand Robb.. luv cards myself.. great piece of poetry in Senryu form luv.. enjoyed this one lots. happy weekend luv..
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Date: 11/19/2010 3:55:00 PM
Interesting ..Sara
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Date: 11/19/2010 2:43:00 PM
I agree , wonderful images....Michael
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Date: 11/19/2010 1:15:00 PM
Nice images of two aces and eights, Robb
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