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Five Afriku

1. A bird on anthill A little boy A stone on the ground 2. Prideful, I couldn't ask For her name and phone number Now she's gone, I'm regretting. 3. In your dream A python is chasing you, You couldn't lift your leg? 4. In your dream You are falling, suddenly You grow wings and flies away? 5. The sun Rising and laughing disdainfully Forgets that somewhere dawn's waiting.

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Date: 5/27/2018 2:17:00 AM
Thanks Caren
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Date: 5/25/2018 11:34:00 PM
Ron, this has exactly the right amount of suspense to really draw in the reader. I immediately thought suicide, but I could be wrong. I like the guessing this poem entails.
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Date: 5/25/2018 11:30:00 PM
Sometimes a few words can have a big impact.This is one of those times.
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Date: 5/25/2018 11:22:00 PM
This poem takes your breath away. Well written, Allana. It's not easy to end up with such a nicely written couplet. The rhymes are impeccable.
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