Fitting End

Bitter-sweet is me,
As I traverse the cavity,
That is my broken heart,
Observing part by part,
The landscape that is divided,
Affection that is ill-provided,
Yet, survive I do within the mist,
Though lacking the love of her kiss,
Continue down the broken line,
Trying not to commit the crime,
Of life and death within the bend,
When you hope that all will end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 8, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Joshua, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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October 13, 2014 at 11:05 AM
I enjoyed the line-continue down the broken line.Love.
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