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Fishing With Grandpa

I feel it tugging
Hanging on - It must be huge!
Bluegill, smiles, grandpa

Haiku - For Sara Kendrick's "A Pleasant Childhood Memory" Contest

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Daver Austin

September 1, 2015 at 11:41 AM

Cute and joy filled. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Lisa Cooper

December 20, 2012 at 1:41 PM

awesome imagery. I remember fishin' with my brother, my grandpa lived too far away!

Nina Mindova

December 19, 2012 at 3:06 AM

I SOMETIMES WRITE CRITICS. NICE TO MEET YOU

Shawn Sackman

December 19, 2012 at 11:47 AM

nice to meet you, too! i just read and commented on your 'my beloved.." poem. it is really good. shawn

Nina Mindova

December 19, 2012 at 3:05 AM

HELLO.I AM TEACHER NINA MINDOVA. NICE TO MEET YOU. I SOMETIMES WRITE.I AM FROM BULGARIA.

Poet Destroyer A

December 17, 2012 at 3:21 PM

I see my niece posted a comment on this poem.. I hope you did not mind me loaning here my space to read a few poems. Here's a thought from me. This is a great haiku. i love the fun and interesting image you are spending with your pa'. lovely childhood memory.. xox~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

November 21, 2012 at 9:05 AM

I loved it too! Happy Turkey Day! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 7, 2012 at 3:39 AM

A big one.....like it Shawn. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A

June 4, 2012 at 3:40 PM

Hi,Shawn your poem is cool hope to read another one of your poems}i{Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA;}