Fishing Trip

Calm black lake water
Hidden world lurking below
Children stare at poles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/2/2013 3:25:00 PM
Hey...nice!....need to get them a box of worms and take them to a farm pond around here...they wouldn't have time to watch the pole for pulling in big sun fish!...awesome poem....can you tell I love to fish??????
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/8/2013 8:03:00 PM
The older two went out with Grampy again today and pulled in 190, that's 190 white perch today!! (I got to help clean them all)
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/2/2013 6:36:00 PM
We actually had a great day. Pulled in 23 White Perch and 2 nice Bass. The kids 5,4,4,8, and 14 all on the boat with parents and grampy :) The 5 year old was upset that every time he put his worm in the water the fish didn't bite it. Took him a little while to understand patience and sharing :)
Date: 9/1/2013 8:05:00 PM
Nice images create the desired pen picture
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 9/2/2013 1:50:00 AM
Thank you.
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