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Fishing Trip

Calm black lake water
Hidden world lurking below
Children stare at poles

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Donna Jones

September 2, 2013 at 3:25 PM

Hey...nice!....need to get them a box of worms and take them to a farm pond around here...they wouldn't have time to watch the pole for pulling in big sun fish!...awesome poem....can you tell I love to fish??????

Adam Hapworth

September 8, 2013 at 8:03 PM

The older two went out with Grampy again today and pulled in 190, that's 190 white perch today!! (I got to help clean them all)

Adam Hapworth

September 2, 2013 at 6:36 PM

We actually had a great day. Pulled in 23 White Perch and 2 nice Bass. The kids 5,4,4,8, and 14 all on the boat with parents and grampy :) The 5 year old was upset that every time he put his worm in the water the fish didn't bite it. Took him a little while to understand patience and sharing :)