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Fishing Haiku

fishing excitement great, landing one is fun, to the water I must go, ~*~ on the bank I do stand, baiting my hook and casting the pole, watching for line dance, ~*~ moments of time tick, awaiting a fish to bite, fishing pole jerking, ~*~ pulling to set the hook, the fishing line is pulling my drag, excitement flows, ~*~ seeing the big fish swimming, pulling it to the waters edge, grab the fish to unhook, ~*~ pushing the stringer through, wonderful fish finally caught, to the pan he goes so tasty,

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Date: 11/21/2012 8:36:00 PM
Richard,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 7/16/2012 4:04:00 AM
Richard, stopping by to say good night~PD
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:28:00 PM
love it - unfortunately I haven't been fishing since high school. This brings back fond memories of trips with my dad and grandpa.
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Richard Mcclellan
Date: 3/20/2012 2:29:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Ann! I love fishing... :)
Date: 2/14/2012 8:16:00 PM
Fishing is good! Great Job!
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Richard Mcclellan
Date: 2/15/2012 12:05:00 AM
Thanks for reading Maxeen!
Date: 2/5/2012 10:52:00 PM
Richard, I'm a haiku lover... and a fish hater..lol.. But, i love the fishing game so much.. I think since i won't eat or touch fish... I get so intrigued by the mystery of water breathers... well I have nothing more to say.. but, lol.. to your haikus ending up on a plate.. thank you for sharing your wonderful poem.. have yourself a good night.. always~ ;-)' pd
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Richard Mcclellan
Date: 2/6/2012 4:35:00 AM
Ha, Ha, yes, fishing is so fun. Oh, and a challenge too. lol, Thanks for reading my poem. Let the day be wonderful for you too my friend! Richard

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