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Fishing

From the dock, our boat speeds off
Into a channel to the calm Gulf of Mexico waters
Stopping when the GPS identifies our favorite reef
Hoping to catch a tasty treat, we cast with anticipation
It’s not until sundown when fish start to hit
Nibbling at our bait in a frenzy until finally
Grouper is on our dinner plate!




January 31, 2019
For Bobbie May’s “Word Play” contest
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Messina Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 6:05 AM
Since fishing is my favorite past-time I had to read this one. I hope all is well Carolyn. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Love Charlie
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:03 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 3:02 AM
- Congratulations on your win in Acrostic Word Play Contest, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raven Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Hi Carolyn, a wonderful Acrostic comes forth from your pen. My Dad used to love going fishing, whether he caught something or not. I think he just enjoyed the peaceful surroundings more than anything. Loved the content of this one. It brought back many memories to me. I never, ever, caught a fish. That is one big fish. I hope it does well for you in the contest. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Devonshire Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Just being out on the sea is its own reward, Vladislav. Catching is important if you're hungry, but there were some days when fish didn't bite and it was still better than doing anything else.
Callus Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Yours is a very good Acrostic, and the topic is one which draws the attention of many. I enjoy fishing (from the rocks), but I have never caught fish that size! I'd need a dozen fish to make up for a single grouper that feeds a family! Hugs // paul
Devonshire Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:42 AM
There's very little waste with Grouper, Paul, but I only caught them when I was out in deep water. The bass that are caught among the rocks are tasty, just smaller and harder to clean. Thanks for reading.
Sands Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:32 AM
Wow! What a fish and a fun poem. I used to fish a lot in the lakes years ago. Loved being out on the water. I enjoyed this :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Sometimes just one fish can feed a family. If you allow your line to get too close to a reef, a Grouper will grab it and hide there. It takes time to learn how to hook them, but it's certainly worth the effort. Glad to know another fishing fan!
Kiser Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:36 PM
Now, that's a fish! Well penned; good luck with the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Cute one. I am not a fan of eating fish, but if you batter it up and fry it for me, I just might like that!
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 8:16 PM
Try Parmesan-crusted baked grouper, Andrea. No oil or breading calories and the taste is heavenly.
Laurie Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:59 PM
G'day Carolyn … you do realize a lot of poets envy you. Fishing is a great hobby and never a waste of time even if the fish don't bite - thank you Carolyn - Lindsay
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Come to Florida, Lindsay, and we'll go fishing. Even when nothing's biting, it's great to be outside all day communing with God and nature.
Onclaud Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 2:26 PM
carolyn, you must really love fishing.. i remember that sea venture you had years back!... what a lovely artpiece and photo!...huggs
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 3:13 PM
My secretary had a hat that said, "I'd Rather Be Fishing." I kept threatening to swipe it, but she loved fishing as much as I did. The only people who ever got seasick on my boat were men. Women fish big time in Florida.
Leffanta Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Poets do have a line - or two, at the ready! Aloha! Rico
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 1:23 PM
Sometimes we'd leave a line or two in the water overnight and wake up to find breakfast. LOL
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:38 AM
oh wow Carolyn what a wonderful hobby and its great to see you with your catch of the day!:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:49 AM
Nothing seems more satisfying than catching dinner. Thanks for reading, Jan.
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