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Fishes Swim In Sky

lunar's glassy pond
                                   shimmering moon moves slowly 
                                           fishes swim in sky

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2016

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August 22, 2016 at 1:41 AM

So gorgeous...Your words are a beautiful homage to the glorious moon. I just love this :-) A favourite and 7+ blessings, lynn

August 22, 2016 at 1:31 PM

Thanks for enlisting my poem as your favorite and for your wonderful comment with 7 my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

June 28, 2016 at 10:50 PM

This is so creative, Barja ... what a poignant twist in line three, that made for a fantastic haiku. It reminded me of the imagination of one of Basho's quirkier haiku: making sea lions and whales / swim in the cherry blossom waves / at the hill top.

June 29, 2016 at 12:48 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl

Catherine Labeau

June 12, 2016 at 6:58 PM

dream head or yours. love it

June 13, 2016 at 10:07 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski

June 12, 2016 at 10:26 AM

Glorious tribute to the Moon.

June 12, 2016 at 10:45 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

June 11, 2016 at 9:38 PM

What a lovely image you've painted, BL! Janice

June 12, 2016 at 1:01 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

June 11, 2016 at 7:22 PM

GREAT imagery. I agree with Charlie here.

June 12, 2016 at 1:00 AM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

June 11, 2016 at 3:14 PM

The heavens inspiring imagery. Well done BL...

June 11, 2016 at 3:24 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 11, 2016 at 2:29 PM

- A beautiful picture, dear Bl (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 11, 2016 at 2:44 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely smiling friend for your beautiful comment and for beautiful 7. Loved always, bl

June 11, 2016 at 2:00 PM

oh what amazing imagery BL very beautifully penned:-) hugs Jan xx 7

June 11, 2016 at 2:14 PM

Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful comment and for beautiful 7. Loved always, bl

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