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Fishes Swim In Sky

lunar's glassy pond shimmering moon moves slowly fishes swim in sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/22/2016 1:41:00 AM
So gorgeous...Your words are a beautiful homage to the glorious moon. I just love this :-) A favourite and 7+ blessings, lynn
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Bl Devnath
Date: 8/22/2016 1:31:00 PM
Thanks for enlisting my poem as your favorite and for your wonderful comment with 7 my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Date: 6/28/2016 10:50:00 PM
This is so creative, Barja ... what a poignant twist in line three, that made for a fantastic haiku. It reminded me of the imagination of one of Basho's quirkier haiku: making sea lions and whales / swim in the cherry blossom waves / at the hill top.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/29/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/12/2016 6:58:00 PM
dream head or yours. love it
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/13/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/12/2016 10:26:00 AM
Glorious tribute to the Moon.
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Date: 6/12/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/11/2016 9:38:00 PM
What a lovely image you've painted, BL! Janice
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/12/2016 1:01:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/11/2016 7:22:00 PM
GREAT imagery. I agree with Charlie here.
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/12/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/11/2016 3:14:00 PM
The heavens inspiring imagery. Well done BL...
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/11/2016 3:24:00 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful uplifting comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/11/2016 2:29:00 PM
- A beautiful picture, dear Bl (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely smiling friend for your beautiful comment and for beautiful 7. Loved always, bl
Date: 6/11/2016 2:00:00 PM
oh what amazing imagery BL very beautifully penned:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 6/11/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful comment and for beautiful 7. Loved always, bl

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