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Fish Supper

hungry heron waits
silent assassin stalks carp
sun breaks through gray clouds

Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest


Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

08/16/20

birdfoodnaturehaiku

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/26/2020 11:21:00 PM

Splendid Haiku with beautiful imageries dear Jan mam.:-) Congratulations on your win. Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/23/2020 7:11:00 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your selection and medal win with this innovative haiku. Delightful imagery. hugs howard

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/23/2020 2:19:00 PM

and the carp gets away as the sun shows the herons shadow,,,lovely imagery!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2020 8:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan, great imagery. Hugs Eve

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 8/22/2020 5:43:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win!! It's an intense dramatic moment!!

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/22/2020 5:09:00 PM

I'm a fan of your limited letter pallette here. Ties the scene together, Yay, Haikus! - love to hate the little birdstards. A fine win in your, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2020 12:26:00 PM

thanks Sigrid:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2020 1:18:00 PM

very nicely done AND WON, Jan. Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2020 3:47:00 PM

thanks Andrea, i have come a long way since I joined the site and had never even heard of haiku let alone written one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/22/2020 11:33:00 AM

We have a nature preserve bounded by a levee that goes around our city. I get to watch the "silent assassins" when I walk. This is delightful! Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2020 3:46:00 PM

they are so amazing to watch as they stalk their prey:-) hugs jan x

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2020 9:07:00 AM

Jan congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku! hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2020 3:45:00 PM

thanks for the contest and my great placement:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2020 5:26:00 PM

I liked the haiku, Jan... Now as for that picture I didn't see the 'hair-on!' (Groan)... I'd laugh, but it hurts all over these days. ~ Back to my man-cave

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2020 2:41:00 AM

love the pun GW:-) hugs jan xx