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Fish Supper

hungry heron waits
silent assassin stalks carp
sun breaks through gray clouds

Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest


Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

08/16/20

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V. Deepa

August 26, 2020 at 11:21 PM

Splendid Haiku with beautiful imageries dear Jan mam.:-) Congratulations on your win. Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)

Howard Kerr

August 23, 2020 at 7:11 PM

Jan, Congratulations on your selection and medal win with this innovative haiku. Delightful imagery. hugs howard

Jeanne Mcgee

August 23, 2020 at 2:19 PM

and the carp gets away as the sun shows the herons shadow,,,lovely imagery!

Eve Roper

August 22, 2020 at 8:15 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan, great imagery. Hugs Eve

Newton Ranaweera

August 22, 2020 at 5:43 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win!! It's an intense dramatic moment!!

Sigrid Ermine

August 22, 2020 at 5:09 PM

I'm a fan of your limited letter pallette here. Ties the scene together, Yay, Haikus! - love to hate the little birdstards. A fine win in your, Jan.

Jan Allison

August 23, 2020 at 12:26 PM

thanks Sigrid:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2020 at 1:18 PM

very nicely done AND WON, Jan. Congratulations.

Jan Allison

August 22, 2020 at 3:47 PM

thanks Andrea, i have come a long way since I joined the site and had never even heard of haiku let alone written one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman

August 22, 2020 at 11:33 AM

We have a nature preserve bounded by a levee that goes around our city. I get to watch the "silent assassins" when I walk. This is delightful! Congratulations!

Jan Allison

August 22, 2020 at 3:46 PM

they are so amazing to watch as they stalk their prey:-) hugs jan x

Tania Kitchin

August 22, 2020 at 9:07 AM

Jan congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku! hugs

Jan Allison

August 22, 2020 at 3:45 PM

thanks for the contest and my great placement:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

August 18, 2020 at 5:26 PM

I liked the haiku, Jan... Now as for that picture I didn't see the 'hair-on!' (Groan)... I'd laugh, but it hurts all over these days. ~ Back to my man-cave

Jan Allison

August 19, 2020 at 2:41 AM

love the pun GW:-) hugs jan xx