Fish Freedom

FISH FREEDOM

a fish in a pond
wants an ocean to swim in
and have its freedom

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kalyanasundaram  Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 7:14 AM
wow...great lines. Yes it is it's freedom. But the environment should tally with the fish.
Oke Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Sure
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2018 at 5:36 AM
Depends if it's a big or little fish and the size of the pond:-) clever haiku helen:-) hugs Jan xx
Oke Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 5:19 PM
Thanks
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