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Fish and Chips Swimming in a sea of ketchup and vinegar By Jan Allison Contest Food and our memory connections Sponsor Andrea Dietrich 11~06~15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/17/2015 12:23:00 PM
Hi Jan...congratulations! Glad to see your tasty fish 'n chips on the winners' list; I liked them when they were wrapped up in newspaper! Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/17/2015 2:46:00 PM
Oh me too Paul with a little grease proof paper bag for the chips to rest in - oh those were the days bring back many childhood memories!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/17/2015 4:58:00 AM
Ah sounds yummy Jan.. Congrats on top podium.. I am a pure veg anyways, will miss this.
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Date: 11/17/2015 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2015 4:53:00 PM
Congrats Jan, for your awesome win on this yummy write! hugs!
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:53:00 PM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/16/2015 4:31:00 PM
Clever wording, Jan! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2015 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win, Jan. It's always a joy to see your name on the winners list! I have enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for your comment. Have a terrific day. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 11/16/2015 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Andrew - its a joy for me to see it one the list too lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/16/2015 10:26:00 AM
I had that in milton Keynes in 2011 and the taste still lingers! Congrats Jan on your placement!
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Date: 11/16/2015 11:19:00 AM
Once tasted never forgotten Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/16/2015 6:55:00 AM
Still haven't satisfied that craving. My 18 year old daughter just came back from a trip to Ireland (high school graduation present from my sister) and we were discussing fish and chips. Very nice imagery, Jan.
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thanks James:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/16/2015 2:17:00 AM
COngratulations JAn... =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Olive:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/16/2015 12:29:00 AM
Jan, Congratulations on your Food & Memory Connects. LUV SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2015 12:18:00 AM
Yummy great win!!!!!!
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Michael:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 7:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Joseph - love the new avatar:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 6:41:00 PM
A yummy treat indeed! Congrats on your delicious win! Hugs
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Cecilia:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 5:09:00 PM
mmmm looks great - congrats on your win
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Date: 11/15/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Dave it I a rare treat these days and I no longer have it swimming in sauce lol that was when I was about 5 lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 4:14:00 PM
Congrats Jan...hugs
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Date: 11/15/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Kayod5:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 12:54:00 PM
Congrats Jan!! Well deserved win :) We have this little family restaurant by our house and they have the BEST fish and chips in the world. So I agree with you!! :) -LU *smiles*
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:57:00 PM
They are delicious LU I don't eat it very often only as a treat:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 11:53:00 AM
Jan, coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/15/2015 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations in your win Jan.
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Date: 11/15/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thanks so much Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 11:07:00 AM
yummy......congrats on the win :)
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Date: 11/15/2015 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Remnants:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/15/2015 10:34:00 AM
Jan, I LOVE this. This is one of my very favorite meals and I love the swimming in a sea of ketchup line (not sure about vinegar!!) BIG congrats in my contest.
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Date: 11/15/2015 10:44:00 AM
Oh Wow Thanks Andrea:-) When I was about 5 the meal literally used to 'swim' in sauce and vinegar - I'm a little more discerning now lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2015 9:29:00 PM
When you say "By Jan Allison" does this mean you cooked this? and more importantly, for me? :)
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:10:00 AM
LOL I have never owned a deep fat fryer - would be oven chips and fish from the freezer shop lol :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2015 4:47:00 PM
This just made me extremely hungry! I love fish and chips drenched in vinegar!! :)
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Date: 11/9/2015 4:49:00 PM
I used to have them swimming in a sea of it when I was a child - now I am a little more reserved lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2015 7:59:00 AM
Sure looks as tasty as it is cleverly written . So , no black pudding !
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Date: 11/9/2015 11:51:00 AM
No black pudding for me lol but fried bread, mushrooms bacon beans mmmm will join you for breakfast lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/7/2015 5:51:00 PM
I make a mix of Cocktail Sauce, Malt Vinegar, lemon and ketchup. You've given me a craving, Jan, and the closest place to get good fish and chips is an hour away. I hope your happy, lol. Very nice.
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Date: 11/7/2015 5:55:00 PM
It is a 5 minute walk to us to the chip shop but we rarely go I prefer to cook at home so it is a treat for us to have them - we sometimes get mum from the care home so she can join us :-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/6/2015 5:20:00 PM
My daughter would have the ketchup all over everything...lol
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Date: 11/6/2015 5:23:00 PM
My son still does! :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2015 5:18:00 PM
I think there are more syllables in the closing contest summation than there are in the poem. That's exactly what the contest calls for though and I think you did a great job ... CayCay
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Date: 11/6/2015 5:22:00 PM
Thanks CayCay - I used to smother my chips in sauce lol no longer feel the need :-) hugs jan xx
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