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First Waltz

the first waltz begins Luna’s red evening gown--- rented for the hour ~*~ 01/26/13 I took an amazing photo of the huge red moon rising at around 6:00 p.m. with a backdrop of a navy blue sky...beautiful!

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Date: 3/13/2013 10:54:00 PM
I love your description of the moon wearing a dress... it's very imaginative. Yet the most beautiful things don't stay very long... sad to think it stayed for merely an hour. Good haiku!
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Date: 1/31/2013 5:50:00 AM
Beautiful, I'm still litsenning
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Date: 1/30/2013 10:37:00 PM
I LOVE this.
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Date: 1/30/2013 12:25:00 PM
lovely haiku - very well described, my friend
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/30/2013 2:18:00 PM
Hey Jack, Thank you, my friend.
Date: 1/28/2013 10:12:00 PM
Magnificent imagery, Annalise, really brilliant expression!! Jag
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Jag!! That wa an amazing sight!
Date: 1/28/2013 5:28:00 PM
beautiful write Annalise....
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:27:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph! Hope all is well.
Date: 1/28/2013 3:15:00 PM
Ahh...elegant metaphor (or simile?) my friend!...Makes me want to dance with the moon...
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:28:00 PM
Thank you, Tim!
Date: 1/28/2013 12:10:00 PM
What a beautiful simile!
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:32:00 PM
Thank you Isaiah! That was an amazing sight.
Date: 1/28/2013 8:28:00 AM
Delightful, my dear poet friend! Hugs, Jack xox
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:31:00 PM
Thank you, Jack! I'm glad you liked it..
Date: 1/27/2013 12:28:00 PM
An amazing Haiku -beautifully worded. Your comments on my Senryu Love is incredible, Annalise. Thanks -Mohammad
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:34:00 PM
Thank you Mohammad! As to the comments on your "Senryu", did I get the meaning or was I off? Sometimes we each read something different in a poem.
Date: 1/27/2013 11:59:00 AM
Beautifully written!
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:35:00 PM
Thank you Sharon! Hope all is well.
Date: 1/27/2013 6:27:00 AM
Satisfaction of enjoying the moment .... Lovely Annalise. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:36:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise! That was a sweet momet!
Date: 1/27/2013 5:58:00 AM
this is amazing Annalise, just love your poetry....love the visual aspect of thei poem....
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:39:00 PM
: ) Thank you, Harry! I'm sure you know that I love your poetry too!
Date: 1/26/2013 10:03:00 PM
most vivid portrait Annalise my friend as beauty exudes from your lovely words ..thankxx for prayers and concern during my health crisis ..am so grateful to still be on earthly side due to God's Grace .. and good friends like u .. on slow mend and hope to be on as health allows .. hope all is well with u ..do u know how Carolyn Devonshire is doing? happy Sunday with blessings.
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Annalise Brigham...a.k.a. Audrey Haick
Date: 1/27/2013 6:05:00 PM
Hi Linda! I'm happy to see you posting "in person" : )! Glad you're doing much better, Linda. Yes, Carolyn is fine, she's just real busy. Do take care.