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First Waltz

the first waltz begins Luna’s red evening gown--- rented for the hour ~*~ 01/26/13 I took an amazing photo of the huge red moon rising at around 6:00 p.m. with a backdrop of a navy blue sky...beautiful!

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/13/2013 10:54:00 PM

I love your description of the moon wearing a dress... it's very imaginative. Yet the most beautiful things don't stay very long... sad to think it stayed for merely an hour. Good haiku!

Sean L Sanders

Date: 1/31/2013 5:50:00 AM

Beautiful, I'm still litsenning

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2013 10:37:00 PM

I LOVE this.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/30/2013 12:25:00 PM

lovely haiku - very well described, my friend

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/30/2013 2:18:00 PM

Hey Jack, Thank you, my friend.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/28/2013 10:12:00 PM

Magnificent imagery, Annalise, really brilliant expression!! Jag

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:26:00 PM

Thank you Jag!! That wa an amazing sight!

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2013 5:28:00 PM

beautiful write Annalise....

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:27:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph! Hope all is well.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/28/2013 3:15:00 PM

Ahh...elegant metaphor (or simile?) my friend!...Makes me want to dance with the moon...

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Tim!

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/28/2013 12:10:00 PM

What a beautiful simile!

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:32:00 PM

Thank you Isaiah! That was an amazing sight.

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/28/2013 8:28:00 AM

Delightful, my dear poet friend! Hugs, Jack xox

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:31:00 PM

Thank you, Jack! I'm glad you liked it..

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/27/2013 12:28:00 PM

An amazing Haiku -beautifully worded. Your comments on my Senryu Love is incredible, Annalise. Thanks -Mohammad

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:34:00 PM

Thank you Mohammad! As to the comments on your "Senryu", did I get the meaning or was I off? Sometimes we each read something different in a poem.

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/27/2013 11:59:00 AM

Beautifully written!

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:35:00 PM

Thank you Sharon! Hope all is well.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/27/2013 6:27:00 AM

Satisfaction of enjoying the moment .... Lovely Annalise. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:36:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise! That was a sweet momet!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/27/2013 5:58:00 AM

this is amazing Annalise, just love your poetry....love the visual aspect of thei poem....

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/29/2013 7:39:00 PM

: ) Thank you, Harry! I'm sure you know that I love your poetry too!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2013 10:03:00 PM

most vivid portrait Annalise my friend as beauty exudes from your lovely words ..thankxx for prayers and concern during my health crisis ..am so grateful to still be on earthly side due to God's Grace .. and good friends like u .. on slow mend and hope to be on as health allows .. hope all is well with u ..do u know how Carolyn Devonshire is doing? happy Sunday with blessings.

Audrey Haick
Date: 1/27/2013 6:05:00 PM

Hi Linda! I'm happy to see you posting "in person" : )! Glad you're doing much better, Linda. Yes, Carolyn is fine, she's just real busy. Do take care.