First Victim

The first victim of one's wrong doings is his very soul!








©  Demetrios Trifiatis
   28 September 2017

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Probir Gupta

September 29, 2017 at 6:52 AM

Indeed so ... We must not slay our flowers ... nice monoku as you always do ...

Joanna Daniel

September 28, 2017 at 6:55 AM

So well said, brother:)

Silent One

September 28, 2017 at 6:50 AM

Yes it is, sadly some cannot control their ego enough to save their soul.. Great one liner full of truth..

Kim Rodrigues

September 28, 2017 at 7:44 AM

How true that is! I've seen that with certain divorces. Let go of hate, reach out in love - perhaps save the world :) Kim

Maria Williams

September 28, 2017 at 6:07 AM

Truer words have not been spoken,. Thank you for visiting and spreading your inspirational words dearest Demetrios....Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 28, 2017 at 5:46 AM

- Word of the day ... and for the future - Thank you my friend, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

September 28, 2017 at 5:42 AM

So true... Thanks for sharing... Glad to see you back...

Russell Sivey

September 28, 2017 at 5:39 AM

This is so very true my friend! Your soul gets hit first before any emotional feelings you may have, which is usually many if the wrong doing is really bad! I surely enjoyed reading this powerful Monoku this morning Demetrios! What a truthful piece, Great Work!!