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"FIRST VICTIM" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 28 SEPTEMBER 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

The first victim of one's wrong doings is his very soul! © Demetrios Trifiatis 28 September 2017 * Back just for today!

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Probir Gupta

Date: 9/29/2017 6:52:00 AM

Indeed so ... We must not slay our flowers ... nice monoku as you always do ...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/28/2017 6:55:00 AM

So well said, brother:)

Silent One

Date: 9/28/2017 6:50:00 AM

Yes it is, sadly some cannot control their ego enough to save their soul.. Great one liner full of truth..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2017 7:44:00 AM

How true that is! I've seen that with certain divorces. Let go of hate, reach out in love - perhaps save the world :) Kim

Maria Williams

Date: 9/28/2017 6:07:00 AM

Truer words have not been spoken,. Thank you for visiting and spreading your inspirational words dearest Demetrios....Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/28/2017 5:46:00 AM

- Word of the day ... and for the future - Thank you my friend, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/28/2017 5:42:00 AM

So true... Thanks for sharing... Glad to see you back...

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/28/2017 5:39:00 AM

This is so very true my friend! Your soul gets hit first before any emotional feelings you may have, which is usually many if the wrong doing is really bad! I surely enjoyed reading this powerful Monoku this morning Demetrios! What a truthful piece, Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/28/2017 5:32:00 AM

A good lesson to live by and remember--many thanks for your lovely thoughts, Demetrios!