First Umbrella

I’d always thought I had it all
Till you breezed softly to my life
I now recall this parasol 
As you walk near as wife

It was the gift that first allured 
As love was young and new
And so it is that we’ve endured
Through tempests more than few

I used to think the color bland
And coverage somewhat small
Now the faded red is grand
Our closeness now enthralls

Umbrella’s fabric old and stained 
Still shields us from above
Far more it means than stopping rain
It’s walked with us from like to love


David Mohn 
02 Mar 2013
Based on Visual 1 of Nette Onclaud’s Symbolism: The Umbrella Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Elias Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 1:39 AM
Very well written. Such a lovely read! Congratulations on your win!!
Kayode Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:24 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats David.
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 4:55 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, david
Mohn Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 2:58 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, David ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mohn Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
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