First To Kiss

By Michael J Falotico



                                                        the first steps of life..
                                                   two sets of lips ,first to kiss..
                                                       older eyes, same feel..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 12, 2011 at 4:11 PM
How I can relate to these lines my White Knight.. amazing thoughts of romantic luv and fervor and fever from those two sets of lips.. still kissing so strong... we are on same page luv.. and all important parts are intact from beach day..haha.. 90 yesterday.. 55 today and lots of rain and thunderstorms.. tomorrow too luv.. so glad we went when we did.. your Jersey Girl in beach mode forever and always luv..
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April 12, 2011 at 3:34 PM
We may get older, but the joy of kissing remains. Delightful senryu, Michael. Love, carolyn
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April 12, 2011 at 2:37 PM
this brought a smile a great write.
Neels Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Quite an interesting Senryu Michael, had me smiling while reading ;) love Wilma
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