First Time

The first time I saw you - there -
Sophisticated, warm-blooded,
And for a kiss, you blubbered - 
Barbary lipped, presenting the bill.

If I'd snuggle up, you'd cover me in fur.
Coo-ee! A real little nest egg,
Said you had it all laid out -
Liar!

Paid me up the river,
Rule of the rudder,
Waddling off - 
As though your feet were webbed.

Then, as the tide ebbed -
More of me bled.

Keep your platitudes, Platypus!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 1, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Great word weaving Chedia..
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