First things first

first sift fear forms when these storms ebb love warms our heart

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Date: 12/1/2023 1:10:00 PM

You seem to pen these Than-bauks so effortlessly, Seeker. I find them excruciatingly difficult to 'get flowing.' Bravo, Gershon

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/1/2023 6:32:00 PM

The ‘trick’ is to visualise at least the key syllable in the second line first, since first and third are relatively easier to rhyme

Date: 11/30/2023 3:56:00 PM

Hello Unseeking Seeker, i believe this to be true.B lessings my fiend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/1/2023 11:24:00 AM

Hello Unseeking Seeker, Your welcome my friend. /Dar.lene/ Blessings mhy friend. /Darlene/

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/30/2023 6:10:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene :)

Date: 11/30/2023 7:06:00 AM

Indeed.. nice one

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/30/2023 11:05:00 AM

Date: 11/30/2023 5:21:00 AM

an appropriate title...depth in such a few lines. Well done!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/30/2023 11:05:00 AM

I employ this form to exercise my brain!