First things first

first sift fear forms
when these storms ebb
love warms our heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:10 PM
You seem to pen these Than-bauks so effortlessly, Seeker. I find them excruciatingly difficult to 'get flowing.' Bravo, Gershon
Seeker Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 6:32 PM
The ‘trick’ is to visualise at least the key syllable in the second line first, since first and third are relatively easier to rhyme
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, i believe this to be true.B lessings my fiend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, Your welcome my friend. /Dar.lene/ Blessings mhy friend. /Darlene/
Seeker Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Thank you, Darlene :)
One Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Indeed.. nice one
Seeker Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 11:05 AM
:)
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