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First things first, let us meld head with our heart Inner conflict ends and we stand erect This path seems simple but it’s a learnt art First things first, let us meld head with our heart With childlike trust and joy, add love to cart Life becomes blissful, serene and perfect First things first, let us meld head with our heart Inner conflict ends and we stand erect 21-January-2022

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Date: 1/22/2022 7:05:00 AM
That’s really lovely U.S ….I like “add love to cart”! Debx
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Date: 1/22/2022 7:08:00 AM
:)
Date: 1/21/2022 11:42:00 AM
I love triolets and you did fantastic with yours. Thanks for my recent first placement. I was so surprised!!
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Date: 1/21/2022 9:00:00 PM
Life is full of surprises! Let all coordinates of the Ferris wheel hold equal appeal!

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