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First Thaw

An old charm bracelet, given up for lost,

spotted in the melting snow

brings summer to her eyes



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Contest: One Kimo
Sponsor: Rick Parise

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2013

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February 17, 2013 at 6:52 AM

Enjoyable winning work..Congrats...Sara

February 17, 2013 at 5:58 AM

I loved this one very much!Congrats on your win.Missing your comments...

February 16, 2013 at 12:50 PM

A lost and found...love it!! Congrats on your placement in the contest !!

Francine Roberts

February 15, 2013 at 7:44 PM

congrts on your win Carrie, lovely picture penned

Poet Destroyer A

February 15, 2013 at 7:32 PM

Carrie.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2013 at 4:20 PM

wowowow, I LOVE this one, Carrie!!!!

February 15, 2013 at 3:57 PM

A lovely kimo, Carrie! Congrats on your HM! Love, Kim

Connie Gildersleeve

February 15, 2013 at 3:23 PM

Carrie congrats on your win. Connie

Black Eyed Susan

February 7, 2013 at 8:28 AM

great imagery - love it :)

February 1, 2013 at 9:58 AM

Oh, wow. This is such a unique spin on the contest (assuming that's what this is for?). I LOVE it! Awesome job :)

January 31, 2013 at 7:49 PM

This poem is sure to win my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What an intriguing piece, Great Work!!

January 31, 2013 at 7:44 PM

Wow!This is EXCELLENT Carrie!!

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