First Summer Rain

first summer rains
sky tears
tap my shoulders
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 25, 2010 at 5:42 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Zera. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Beautiful images in this haiku Zera - rgds WN
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June 24, 2010 at 11:11 AM
Lovely haiku i can picture a person savoring a moment like that...P.D.
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June 24, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Lovely haiku, Zera! It's such a tranquil image you paint. Did you know that Louisianna yesterday had black rain carrying oil onshore? I hope the Gulf can be restored to a pristine state because hurricane season is coming and so many of these storms absorb moisture from the gulf. Enjoyed this refreshing poem very much! Love, Carolyn
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