First Snow

Blanket of security       Soiled by man       Muddied footprints
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 22, 2015 at 10:52 PM
RICHARD, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
A   Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:56 PM
PPPS... I NOTICED YOU USED THIS POEM IN TWO OF MY RECENT CONTEST... :)
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March 22, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Clever, congrats!
A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 7:26 PM
RICHARD, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like. Enjoy your win, LOVE LINDA
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January 3, 2015 at 2:24 AM
Simply irresistible.bravo!
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January 3, 2015 at 2:25 AM
I will post it on my poetry blog vcobor.blogspot.gr
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:30 PM
glad you liked waterfall, richard. thanks for the comment.
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January 2, 2015 at 8:11 PM
ME LIKES!!! happy new year, richard
Ferry Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 8:47 PM
Rick.....what do your friends call you?
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Oh so descriptive love this clever haiku:-) Hugs jan xxx
Ferry Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Thanks Happy New Year
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