First Sight

Yes, it’s a fact, at love’s first dawning
I was smitten by the beauty of you.
It made in me a desperately wanting
Before a thing about you I found true.

I can confess it now, say it straight out
I was consumed by your bodily being.
In that mystic moment I had no doubt
That all else could await my perceiving.

My mind raised sobering objections
Certain I had forsaken my senses.
But my heart had its own reflections
And deployed soul-deep defenses.

The yield of the years makes clear
Your beauty came from down deep.
Eyes and heart found what was dear—
A love that we would forever keep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 2:04 PM
HEY PAUL I LIKED YOUR POEM FIRST SIGHT. WELL WRITTEN. DO YOU BELIEVE IN FIRST SIGHT?
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December 12, 2014 at 2:51 PM
I'm pleased that you liked it; thank you. As to your question, I believe there are times when one person "reads" another person without a word being spoken—an intuitive process. So, love at first sight is not an impossibility. Unfortunately, however, the process is by no means fail proof.
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