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First Sight

Yes, it’s a fact, at love’s first dawning I was smitten by the beauty of you. It made in me a desperately wanting Before a thing about you I found true. I can confess it now, say it straight out I was consumed by your bodily being. In that mystic moment I had no doubt That all else could await my perceiving. My mind raised sobering objections Certain I had forsaken my senses. But my heart had its own reflections And deployed soul-deep defenses. The yield of the years makes clear Your beauty came from down deep. Eyes and heart found what was dear— A love that we would forever keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/12/2014 2:04:00 PM
HEY PAUL I LIKED YOUR POEM FIRST SIGHT. WELL WRITTEN. DO YOU BELIEVE IN FIRST SIGHT?
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/12/2014 2:51:00 PM
I'm pleased that you liked it; thank you. As to your question, I believe there are times when one person "reads" another person without a word being spoken—an intuitive process. So, love at first sight is not an impossibility. Unfortunately, however, the process is by no means fail proof.

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