First Rain

First Rain

 

the earth

shook

 

from the

coming motion,

 

wetness was

falling

 

and man

knew emotion

 

drowning in

sins and sorrows

 

God, had made

his decision...

 

and  not many

took heed

 

8-1-09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 24, 2009 at 4:29 PM
I like it, sounds biblical:)
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