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First Poem: What If

What if we kill? What if we hate? What if we abuse? What if we discriminate? The world is ending. We don't care. Theres hardly love, but here and there. We have the strength. We are bright. We have the words To make things right. Teens are killing themselves. But we don't care. Suicidal thoughts. No memory's there. What if we spread the love? What if we learned to share? What if we had help from above? What if we tried to care? We can make a change, that's for sure We are the one's that have the cure. But the question we ask ourselves. What if?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 12:54:00 PM
hey brendan...this poem is flippin amazing lol...i know you dont know me by this name...but you know who i am lol...with love always...FRIPPO
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Date: 12/9/2010 10:37:00 AM
well, you told me to read it and i did. i really liked it. it was well written and thought out. good job!! <3
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Date: 12/2/2010 12:14:00 PM
good one! Soon all suffering will end and a new world will be installed. (2Peter 3:13)
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Date: 11/30/2010 6:08:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us today in your writing Brendan. Wonderful thought provoking writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 1:48:00 PM
Very thought provoking write Brendan... The question we should be asking is "What can we do to change." Lay
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