First Poem

i was eight her beauty I couldn't escape so, I wrote a poem


Contest: How my first poem was born
Sponsored by: JCB Burl
Date Created: 10/02/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 5:17 PM
love love it!! Congrats, bobby
Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:45 AM
adorable ~ congrats
Goldsmith Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" Write. Enjoy your win and day................
Mitra Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 5:53 AM
You started pretty young Bobby :)...Congrats on your win....Hugs..:)
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 5:26 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 1:11 PM
:))) ... so sweet and lovely, Bobby :) - Good luck in the contest :) - The title of mine is :"My Bonus Child" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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