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First One After Burial To Burn

Lonely I am, with boyfriend she visits jointly  
Places flowers, burns candle, prays devotedly  
Six feet deep, Heart burns on her every return 
Hitendra, lovers swear, first one, after Burial to Burn*  



* Hindus burn dead ones

(Entry for Members Contest - Poetic Epitaph by Andrea Dietrich )

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/29/2010 11:08:00 AM I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Hitendra. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/25/2010 7:11:00 AM Hitendra, I understand now why your epitaph did not make it into my contest winners. It was a misunderstanding about your name. LEt me soupmail you and try to explain. It was a nice epitaph, dear. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/25/2010 7:11:00 AM Do you know how to see your soupmail? I know you are new here. Just find soupmail in your member area and see what I write you there. Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 10/15/2010 9:41:00 AM @Carol - Thnx for ever so encouraging words...wish u too a lovely weekend & never ending inspiration for your pen........Luv/Best wishes always.... Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/15/2010 5:28:00 AM Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Hitendra. Wishing you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 10/14/2010 9:57:00 AM @Catie @Sara ... thnx for nice comments & wishes for contest......Luv & Best wishes always.......... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/14/2010 6:34:00 AM Good luck in the contest with interesting Epitaph..Sara Login to Reply