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First of Morning Uplifts




for Laura Loo
Re-submitted 8/30/2017

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Brenda Meier-Hans

September 4, 2014 at 2:56 PM

Oh how I enjoyed reading this. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

September 3, 2014 at 10:56 PM

sweet win...pd

Jan Allison

September 3, 2014 at 6:10 PM

a glorious sonnet with fabulous imagery. many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley

July 22, 2014 at 11:16 PM

Simply amazing write!!!! I am adding this to my fav list my friend. SIX LINES OF GREATNESS!!! "Painted by some godly delight A daybreak’s grandeur shines aloft That I, a keeper of the night Lay wide- awake on prairies soft. Beholden by sun's harmony The wisp of heaven breathes in me." I am in awe of this write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Monterey Sirak

July 16, 2014 at 8:52 AM

You never cease to leave me in awe at your ability to craft the most amazing images and bring them to life.

Ken Carroll

July 13, 2014 at 1:53 PM

Uplifting and lovely rich imagery Nette!

David Williams

July 13, 2014 at 1:01 PM

Nette, this is one of the best sonnets I have read in a long tim, wonderful choice of words and so well constructed, excellent write....David

Ugwu Cornelius Chidera

July 13, 2014 at 6:01 AM

nice poem!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 13, 2014 at 12:33 AM

Splendid glorious write Nette! Unique imagery in this one! Thnx for sharing!

Jeremy Street

July 12, 2014 at 10:38 PM

Sweet Brilliant Precious Nette *:*(* I Wouldn't Say, 'God Like,' As Much As We Would, "HIS HAND." Yet, One Does Live Within A Place Which Seems Bent Upon Stealing, "HIS BEAUTY'S INDISCRIBABLE GLORY"....But, Your Poetry Is Exquisitely Beautiful....KLove *