First of March Two Thousand and Eleven

water’s decisions…
river eroding  tall walls
natural  structures 


Inspired By Chris’s contest on this day of our lord,
March 1, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 8:05 AM
I enjoyed that "water's decisions" line.
Mehta Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Good personification with apt images, robb
Onclaud Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 6:50 AM
imaginative wordplay that makes me reflect, robb! winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette
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