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First of March Two Thousand and Eleven

water’s decisions… river eroding tall walls natural structures Inspired By Chris’s contest on this day of our lord, March 1, 2011

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Date: 3/4/2011 8:05:00 AM
I enjoyed that "water's decisions" line.
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Date: 3/1/2011 9:30:00 AM
Good personification with apt images, robb
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Date: 3/1/2011 6:50:00 AM
imaginative wordplay that makes me reflect, robb! winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette
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