Julianne Williams Poet Rhyme

First mistake

I loved You 

That was my first mistake, stupid from the start 

Plummeting statistics show, A fairy tale ending ends unfairly, on my happily ever after chart. 

Feeling over thinking, and Losing all what made me smart 


    Now look at me 

Bleeding, piecing together the bloodied shattered shards. 

Trying to fix your mess

Cradling, as I fail to mend the no longer Beating and Defeated 


                                 Breaking of my heart 


I should've known not to trust a man

Deemed incapable of playing a role

Which he himself,  cast the part

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Patrick Cornwall September 30, 2025 at 9:27 AM I believe you learned there is no reason For a second part or part two. You have explained it all before and I’m going to read some more of your writings.Patrick Julianne Williams October 1, 2025 at 5:03 AM Thank you xx

Paul Bell February 28, 2025 at 3:27 PM Love is tough and definitely should come with a health warning. On the plus side, gives you scope to find another. Julianne Williams February 28, 2025 at 8:00 PM Love holds much power xxxx