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First mistake

I loved You That was my first mistake, stupid from the start Plummeting statistics show, A fairy tale ending ends unfairly, on my happy ever after chart. Feeling over thinking, and Losing all what made me smart Now look at me Bleeding, piecing together the bloodied shattered shards. Trying to fix your mess Cradling, as I fail to mend the no longer Beating and Defeated Breaking of my heart I should've known not to trust a man who deem incapable of playing a role which he himself cast the part

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Date: 2/28/2025 3:27:00 PM
Love is tough and definitely should come with a health warning. On the plus side, gives you scope to find another.
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Julianne Williams
Date: 2/28/2025 8:00:00 PM
Love holds much power xxxx

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