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First Lovers Glance

So cloyingly allusive and eagerly timid!

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Jl Sadberry

Date: 10/8/2011 6:53:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Sounds Sooo Enticingly Seductive My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Laura! *^_^* Dear John Told Myself That Your Lovely Beauty Is Italian &, I Love That *^_^* Something About A Lady With Italian Blood Running Through Her Veins & Nature *^_^* I Find Its Reflection Amid This Wonderful Verse Somehow Someway, My Dear!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

Swairik Das

Date: 6/4/2010 12:34:00 PM

Thanx Laura for ur comment and wish :) on my poem Summer at 8pm.

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/29/2010 6:28:00 PM

All the questions that rage in the mind after that first glance! Will they or will they not. We never know until we ask! Loved this one.

Destiny Orschell

Date: 4/25/2010 11:53:00 AM

Love the vocab! Congradulations!!! -Destiny

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/24/2010 4:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Laura. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/24/2010 10:52:00 AM

vert nice congrats faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2010 10:51:00 AM

Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara Kendrick