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First Love-Last Goodbye

Tears escape slowly
Flowing down her young, sweet face
Her heart left to bleed

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 24, 2010 at 12:44 PM

Congrats Shirley on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a really great one to share with us all my friend with luv...

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2010 at 7:45 AM

Shirley, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.

Nick Bagnall

October 20, 2010 at 4:25 AM

Sad, but very eloquent, enjoyed. Congrats on your feature.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 19, 2010 at 10:28 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shirley. Love, Carol

John Freeman

August 19, 2010 at 11:15 AM

A sad but beautiful Senryu, Shirley. Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman

July 28, 2010 at 2:20 AM

beautiful senryu, Harry

Wilma Neels

July 18, 2010 at 11:14 AM

Sad piece with great imagery, WNN

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 16, 2010 at 5:27 AM

A beautiful new day, many wonderful new poems to read of which yours is among,the weekend is upon us. What more could I ask for? I hope you have a fantastic weekend filled with love, happiness, and lots of inspiration Shirley. Love, Carol