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First Love

I want to die because of sorrow. I wish I embrace you before joining the death row. I`m ready to god taking everything I gain. So that I can be with you one more day again. Before you my life was meaningless. Before you I didn't know what love is. I am your gipsy, your pilgrim. You are the key to my destine. You are the first love; you, the last one My whole life is you, you the only one You are the pure love God gifts me. You were my love and you will be.

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/28/2017 9:50:00 PM

This sounds like a thunderbolt to the heart. An all encompassing passion. Well written. Welcome!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 9/28/2017 6:32:00 PM

Hi, Sohrab, So short but very, very sweet a heartfelt sonnet of love. Love it. Welcome to the Soup family. And as I tell everyone WRITE ON James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2017 12:47:00 PM

What a beautiful heartfelt poem, she obviously means the world to you - I hope your love remains forever:-) hugs jan xx

Sherifat Aduku

Date: 9/13/2017 11:01:00 AM

This is a lovely piece!!! she's so lucky. You did well poured out your heartfelt.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/24/2017 8:29:00 AM

Such a beautiful written poem, your feelings about that girl clearly shows that how much you love her, may she understand your love and come back to you, you ve done a very good job in explaining your feelings, poetry is all about been clear about whay you write, a really good one, well I also have poems of similar category, I will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest about them