First Love

FIRST LOVE Mirth fills, fades all gloom When in life first love blooms Tender, sweet and curious That gentle touch so glorious Smiles exchange, matching gaze All time spring and cleared haze Sun-kissed mountains, shiny brooks Moistened grass- beds, secret nooks Spray of care, endless talks Sleepless nights, clasped hands, long walks Fresh roses, tulips, tabebuia Enchanting love's scent like magnolia If sustains forever this relation Magical life, mystique sensation If crashes mid-way, deadly heart- break Even magnolia withers, only tears spake Dark clouds mask the moon snatching moonlight Time grabs back those gifts of lucky happy delight In closed chapters first-love finds its place Time's lesson through this jolt to embrace bitter pains and wait with bleeding heart to weep in rain praying for a new start. © Anulaxmi Nayak, 2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2016 5:45:00 PM

Very beautiful write and congratulations on your win, Anulaxmi :) Hugs Eve

Scott Williams

Date: 10/9/2016 4:25:00 AM

Anu, I am carried away by your words. This is such a beautiful poem. What a well deserved win. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2016 4:33:00 PM

Anulaxmi Nayak , Congratulations on your win. Stop by my latest blog "No Words" if you'd like. LINDA

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/9/2016 2:42:00 AM

Dear Linda, thank you so much, you made me so happy with this win:) //love, Anu:)

Mr Gautam

Date: 10/26/2015 2:14:00 AM

your words sounds magical and expound the meaning of love on their own. Cheers !! :)

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/30/2015 11:30:00 AM

Dear Gautam, I appreciate your visit and your appreciation! thank you very much... and sorry for delayed reply.....your words are truly encouraging and means a lot to me:).......love, Anu:)