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First Love

first person i adored,
             first heartache and tearful songs.
                         mem'ries never die.

cute lovefirst lovesenryu

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Gregory Ramos

January 2, 2014 at 3:15 PM

LOVE IT thank you for sharing

Aiyah Torres

January 2, 2014 at 5:40 PM

thank you too , Greg!! :))

Funom Makama

December 30, 2013 at 10:09 AM

sweet, plain and true. I want to begin writing haiku too. I really love this one in particular. Nice work my dear friend and thanks a lot for commenting on my poem.

Aiyah Torres

December 30, 2013 at 10:27 AM

your most welcome, Funom!! try it,, a bit of nervous when i started to write.. thought that it wouldn't be as effective as what they've done.. hehe... Thank you, You appreciate my work! ^_6, you always have a friend here,, AiyaH =)