First Love

first person i adored, first heartache and tearful songs. mem'ries never die.

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Gregory Ramos

Date: 1/2/2014 3:15:00 PM

LOVE IT thank you for sharing

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/2/2014 5:40:00 PM

thank you too , Greg!! :))

Funom Makama

Date: 12/30/2013 10:09:00 AM

sweet, plain and true. I want to begin writing haiku too. I really love this one in particular. Nice work my dear friend and thanks a lot for commenting on my poem.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/30/2013 10:27:00 AM

your most welcome, Funom!! try it,, a bit of nervous when i started to write.. thought that it wouldn't be as effective as what they've done.. hehe... Thank you, You appreciate my work! ^_6, you always have a friend here,, AiyaH =)

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/28/2013 8:36:00 PM

This is a fine short poem. I think it is really a senryu since it is not about nature. Thank you for your kind words. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Aiyah Torres
Date: 12/29/2013 10:39:00 PM

Matthew..thanks for your nice words... :')) Happy New Year!!!