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First Love

There was an cold October rain. Filling the fall air! The sky was dark and gloomy! It was an ending to a summer of timeless love! Tears stream down the young girls face. That wasn't all that was ending. She was letting go of her very first love. Through the years her mind drifted to that first love. Wondering what that love could have been. 30 years has past she pleads a prayer to Heaven above. Let me find real true love, before I leave this cruel world. That first love she gave up years ago has re-entered her life. Was that prayer answered. Only time will tell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/4/2016 12:31:00 AM
Patrica Bowen Salyers, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:47:00 AM
PATRICA, I like this very much SKAT
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Date: 11/20/2012 11:15:00 PM
This is very moving, well done.
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