First Love

When i first saw her time froze
I tried talking to her with my eyes closed
My voice stumbled out of my lips
My legs got weak I couldn´t feel my hips
I was sweating cold and my hands were slippery
So I ran away and let it be a mystery.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 29, 2011 at 6:25 PM
there is a quality of innocence about this piece that i like. could have been a bit longer, but still very good poetry. top write.
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