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First Love

music blares, drowning my senses i see you; the light shines in your eyes and glisten like the stars themselves as if the fairy queen herself has enchanted you her radiant light. you take your steps toward me a smile broadens across your lips revealing a glistening smile, your like a dream the way you appear, you take my hand. as if floating; featherlight. you whisper in my ear, a smile plays at my mouth. your skin is like velvet under my palm. you aura is incredible in this light. a truly handsome sight "i love thee, as thou loveth me" i whisper back to you. i close my eyes to hold the picture more clearly in my mind, i feel your breath on my neck from behind. my eyes open. you vanish. i stare plainly in to the darkness of my room. with only the light of luna to bring in the light that lights the distant corners of the walls. my lips curve to a full pout. trembling. i feel discouraged, but i know you'll return to me soon. next time i sleep, i will see you. we will dance, you'll whisper in my ear. "sweet one; don't tremble once i leave, i'll return, just await me and i'll come." sweet laughter.

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Date: 6/7/2010 9:15:00 AM
beautiful <3
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