First Love

The grass holds the mold of our bodies
the sky is witness to out love
the sun has kissed our body for luck 
the wind carries our secret away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 23, 2010 at 9:13 AM
I enjoyed reading your Beautiful poetry today . Have a wonderful weekend and keep the ink flowing. Love, Carol
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