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First Love

the one i love refuses to love me back screams with joy to another and whispers nothing to me stares and mumbles something uncomprehendable But i long for his attention seek for his voice found his tolerance and was rewarded with his vengence i silently beg turn around and notice the girl sitting beside you and... evoke the pain that strangles mine heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/20/2011 5:16:00 AM
I can understand the pain....
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Date: 7/24/2010 4:22:00 PM
Your writes are so sad. Loving someone including allowing them the chance to be happy with the person of their choice while we step aside and wish them all life's blessings.
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Date: 1/23/2010 7:38:00 AM
There is little we can do to make someone love us, but showing love to them is a good start, Tumelo. I do hope you find your feelings are soon returned. Very heartfelt poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:49:00 PM
ao! thats a nice poem AMZO, but it seems like first love doesn't look good for you. PS the home of creative pens.
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