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First Love

I thought that love was great Until it happened to me For when I fell in love with you It wasn’t meant to be. I gave all I had When love came my way. You took all, and sadly Then you wouldn’t stay. And I know as my heart is breaking And I feel it will never mend. That this is just the beginning Though I wish it were the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/29/2010 5:17:00 PM
What can I say? I'm a rhymer by nature. In response to your other comment, If you had all my poems in order and read them, You would know my whole life story.
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:37:00 AM
I think it is hindered by the rhyming, but nice, i felt it, short, sweet, and vague enough to be related too on different levels.
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