First Love

The emptyness inside
The tears that I cry
The words that he said
The screaming in my head
The pain that I feel
It's way too real
The sad look in my eye
There's no more sparkle inside
There's nothing left to do 
Except stop loving you
I don't think that's what I want to do
Bcuase I'll never stop loving you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loving Iii Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 1:24 PM
normal. compleatly normal. the phase going along at a normal pace. jhl
Knowles Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 1:12 PM
i like this piece. i can image the feeling your expressing in it, almost feel it myself. very nice job :)... Livy p.s hope you find the " sparkle inside" with someone you love.
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