''First Love''

While Adam and Eve
make first love, God smiles. Eden
flowers. And Earth moves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Cute! Love that last line ;))) Enjoyed Ngoc, thank you! Have a lovely day. ~mo
Nguyen Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Thanks, Pigeon Tart, for commenting and enjoying my haiku! I wish you a most lovely day, too. ~Ngoc
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