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''First Love''

While Adam and Eve make first love, God smiles. Eden flowers. And Earth moves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/28/2020 7:38:00 AM
Cute! Love that last line ;))) Enjoyed Ngoc, thank you! Have a lovely day. ~mo
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 5/28/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Pigeon Tart, for commenting and enjoying my haiku! I wish you a most lovely day, too. ~Ngoc