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First Lightrays

First Lightrays neath covers, do I lie splice of sun blesses my eyes imperfect, I rise English Haiku 5/7/5 October 28, 2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/28/2019 8:09:00 PM

Bullseye! Touche! Voila! This is great. Love what you did with 'rise!' Smiles, Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/29/2019 5:16:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon,,, Panagiota xxx

Janet Grace

Date: 10/28/2019 2:05:00 PM

I love this haiku written by you, and I admire your grammar too. To recline is to lie, to place is lay. So many people say thet are going to lay down. That makes my teeth grind, I admit I am a grammarholic.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/28/2019 2:11:00 PM

Hysterical! I never know the difference, Me? A mental blockhead)) I just write and do what I can. Feel free to notify me, via mail, if I am in error. Your friend, Panagiota. Grammarholic better than alchohlic-))

Chris Green

Date: 10/28/2019 11:44:00 AM

Nicely done my friend. Good morning!!!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 10/28/2019 12:41:00 PM

And a good morning to you Chris!! Thank you.