Panagiota Romios Poet Haiku

First Lightrays

  

              First Lightrays



     neath covers, do I lie
     splice of sun blesses my eyes
     imperfect, I rise


     English Haiku
     5/7/5

 
     October 28, 2019




 

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Gershon Wolf October 28, 2019 at 8:09 PM Bullseye! Touche! Voila! This is great. Love what you did with 'rise!' Smiles, Gershon Panagiota Romios October 29, 2019 at 5:16 AM Thanks, Gershon,,, Panagiota xxx

Janet Grace October 28, 2019 at 2:05 PM I love this haiku written by you, and I admire your grammar too. To recline is to lie, to place is lay. So many people say thet are going to lay down. That makes my teeth grind, I admit I am a grammarholic. Panagiota Romios October 28, 2019 at 2:11 PM Hysterical! I never know the difference, Me? A mental blockhead)) I just write and do what I can. Feel free to notify me, via mail, if I am in error. Your friend, Panagiota. Grammarholic better than alchohlic-))

Chris Green October 28, 2019 at 11:44 AM Nicely done my friend. Good morning!!! Panagiota Romios October 28, 2019 at 12:41 PM And a good morning to you Chris!! Thank you.